Thursday, 8 June 2017

Should we have fidget Spinner in school

Title: Should Fidget Spinner be allowed in school
Introduction:
Fidget spinner should not be allowed in school because it make noise and people will focus on the fidget spinner not there work and also a kid choked on a little part of the fidget spinner




First paragraph: Fidget Spinner are noise

O
I think fidget spinner are noise because...


R
The metal fidget spinner make a weird chain sound we you spin them and if you spin about 10 you will want to smash it into small parts, but the other fidget spinner are  quietly but we are talking about the noise so if you buy a metal fidget you will see and heard the noise that why fidget spinner should not be in school.







E

There are a lot of fidget spinner in our class so that means there is a extra noise in the classroom and we don’t want to heard a lot of fidget spinner noise




O
That is why fidget spinner are noise maker!!



Second paragraph: Don’t focus on work

O
Fidget  should not be in school because they focus on the fidget spinner and not on there work

R
When people play with there fidget spinner when it is learning time, they start to focus on the spin of the fidget spinner and not on there work

Sorry this is not one!! ?






E
Fidget spinner are toy that want you to focus on it because 2 boy in own class were playing with there fidget spinner and didn't know that the teacher was looking at them like i said before when you spin it you focus





O

That is why fidget spinner make you focus on it. Is it true or not ??


Third paragraph: Small Parts

O
First of all someone can cut them self with the small part so it is safer without fidget spinner


R
When a little try to clean there fidget spinner with her mouth and a part of the fidget spinner went in her body and she was lucky the doctor can get it out that is why we should not have fidget spinner




E
If someone try to clean it with there mouth again, they could die this now but no one wants that so we should not let 4 and down kid play with fidget spinner


O
That is why we should not have fidget spinner



Conclusion:

Summarise the 3 ideas
We should not have fidget spinner because they make noise you can get cut my the part and you focus on the fidget spinner and not on your own work




Recommendations or reflections
I think this was fun because i got to talk about fidget spinner i really want to do this again


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