Hello Coralee, Its Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School. (Rimu class) Good job with your blog. I like how you made a slide for your blog. Maybe next time you could make the slide a bit shorter. I kinda got boared of the really long slide. You could also add a better discription of what you had to do. Was this a set task??? Ka pai Good job. Bridget.
Hello Coralee, Its Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School. (Rimu class) Good job with your blog. I like how you made a slide for your blog. Maybe next time you could make the slide a bit shorter. I kinda got boared of the really long slide. You could also add a better discription of what you had to do. Was this a set task???
ReplyDeleteKa pai Good job.
Bridget.
Bored* and thank you for the feedback but that feedback belongs to my teacher, he was the one adding all the slide.
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