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Wednesday 5 December 2018

Freestyle Writing

Freestyle writing
WALT: Freestyle Write About An Image


Today our teacher asked us to write a story about a picture. This is what I wrote about this image. Tell me what you think in the comments down below.
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The wind rushed through her hair as she descended the mountain at great speed. For most children this would be an exhilarating, even 
terrifying experience, but for Lucy it was just an ordinary journey to school.

Her house was on top of the mountain making her journey to school dangerous. She got used to it eventually but she is still scared it might break. She arrived at her school, saying Good morning to her teacher as she sat down at her desk. She looked to the classroom door to see that her friend Milla has arrived! She smiled as Milla came to sit next to her. Lucy loved her school, because nothing bad ever happened thanks to Master Bruce Lee. 

Bruce as we all all him for short, always looked after the school and taught us Martial arts, on Mondays and friday for P.E but not all the time he usually comes in to check on us. She went to look in her bag to find a pencil. All she saw was rulers, books, coloring pencils and rubbers, but no pencils. Her school wasn't an ordinary school, it was quite unique, with it's beautiful ponds and flowers but her school was made with a rare type of wood which would not let bad energy pass through.

One day we had a new teacher come through, his name was Collin and he was to take over Bruce because one of his grandma passed on. Lucy didn't get a good vibe around him so she keeped an eye on him. The next day Master Bruce Lee arrived to school early. The funeral was short that why he came back early, but because none of the teacher knew he was coming back that early, so Collin was still at the school. When Bruce entered the room and saw Collins he stared at him when a evil look, Collins looked back I backed up with terrier.

Master Bruce Lee took out his sword, and told him to get out. No one knew that Mr. Collins had secretly put a sword in the classroom just incase he did arrive unexpectedly. Lucy, Milla and all the other classroom kids ran out of the room knowing things are going to go down. Mr Collins slide down the desk and grabbed the sword and tried to hit Bruce Lee but he failed, Bruce lee blocked the attack knowing he would go for the legs. 



BANG! BOOM! CRASH! We all sat in the hallway worrying who is going to come up on top. "AHHHHH" Collins screamed in agony. We all were scared for our lives, thinking about is he really going to kill someone in our own class! Enough was enough, Lucy opened the door to see Bruce Lee sword against Collins neck. Lucy screamed "BRUCE STOP!" They both stared at her "Go back to the hall" Bruce said, "NO, ARE YOU REALLY GONNA KILL SOMEONE" Lucy screamed "If I have to yes" Bruce said in a calm voice "Then you would never be welcomed anywhere!" Lucy started to walk out of the classroom. 

He signed and let collins go with a bloody nose. Lucy was so happy but she had to leave because her mum and dad are taking her somewhere. After that, everything was normal ever since. 


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